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  1. 01-04-2012, 06:53 PM #1
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    coastlines

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    very good - and thought-provoking!

    maybe you could add more? This feels a bit like the last verse/section of a longer poem.
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    Very nice Firebird.
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    I don't know why everyone always pressures poetry to be long and informative. It is not prose!

    Anyways, this is simply incredible. Way to freakin' go. Seriously, I know I'm a little much, but I'm very passionate about what I like lol. But this is just an incredible thought and I really love it. It says so much to me... and I can totally relate.
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    Forget your personal tragedy. We are all bitched from the start and you especially have to be hurt like hell before you can write seriously. But when you get the damned hurt, use it-don't cheat with it."



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  5. 01-27-2012, 08:56 PM #5
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    Ravel, Gumby and sainenitouche,

    Many thanks for your comments. Much appreciated. This poem has just been accepted for publication, which was great news.

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