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    Roses (content?)

    “Do we have to do this? It's freezing.”
    He twists in his seat to glare at me.
    I move my gaze to the car's floor.
    “It's not as if she knows,” I mutter.

    A dozen white roses, as always.
    Classically cliché.
    It is cold in this graveyard,
    no color save that of a few other flowers
    placed in front of silent stone.

    The ride home is uncomfortable.
    Sister holds his hand and I wonder
    if I ever had that connection with him.

    I wonder if she knows
    he does this routine every year.
    If she somehow senses that,
    does she understand how I feel
    when hit?

    Does she pity me as she sees me
    devour these pills?
    I doubt it.
    Her body has decayed into the dirt
    and no roses will change that.
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    Some very dark stuff Damien. I think I am getting as much of the story from what you don't say as I do from what you do say. I'm going to have to come back to this one a few times.

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