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    Smile sometimes

    sometimes when nothing seems to go for you,
    you feel you have to turn around,
    you want
    to run to something
    past,
    you yearn
    to trace
    a speech,
    a line,
    a number rang,
    a song perhaps.

    the present is
    slipping away,
    your fingers
    tighten
    to try
    and cling
    onto a draft,
    it feels so light
    yet
    cold and brash,
    it runs through you
    swiflty and fast.

    the present is,
    blowing away
    pages of words
    a language can
    no longer fit.
    fingers detach
    the weight is harsh
    meaning of now
    has further passed.


    sometimes when
    wind
    whistles
    at nights,
    it feels so right
    it chants a tune,
    melodic lune.

    sometimes when
    down is kept aloof,
    solo, empty,
    tired and full,
    a new dawn
    comes out in
    bloom to say
    going up is,
    the only way.

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    This is quite wonderful...ethereal and lovely. Too many beautiful lines to quote my favorite. So well done, my friend. Peace...Jul

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    Firemajic lovely to see you and thank you for reading my poem .
    Your words are magical

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