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    For Those Who Starve

    Would you hold a minute while I’ve had my coffee?
    Let me finish spreading the cream cheese
    Onto Miss Meads bagel
    And could you hand it over to dear Margaret when I’m done
    Thank you

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    hmm, I'll have to give this more thought, but I like the brevity and the details - there's some backstory I'm on the cusp of grasping
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    If I'm right, and I might not be but I'm gonna have a crack at it anyways, the title is everything. This sounds like a critical piece about authority, maybe politicians. It sounds as if the bagel eater is snubbing the famished, which would be the critique. And I guess that the writers' request at the bottom is both ignorant and egotistical. That's my guess. Haha, idk though
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    Lol just pokin fun a blast from the past

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