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  1. 12-12-2011, 01:30 AM #1
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    I choose you

    I choose you for love.
    For pleasure
    To treasure and measure
    my years.
    My smiles and tears;
    My dreams and fears--
    My all.
    You chose me as your wife.
    I choose you for my life.
    To share and care
    and bear your children.
    There's nothing like a simile.
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  2. 12-13-2011, 12:51 PM #2
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    I love this! So soft and beautiful, this sounds like something that one would include as part of their wedding vows... A pleasure to read. Peace...Jul
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  3. 12-13-2011, 05:20 PM #3
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    I love the simplicity of this, Annie, it belies the depth of the message. Echo Jul's sentiment that it would work wonderfully as wedding vows. Well done, love.

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