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    Whence

    If not love, temperance,
    Encompassed in our hearts is a map to self-truth.
    If not trust, acceptance,
    Any inheritances of nature cannot be overturned.
    If not honor, persistence,
    The will to achieve supersedes the necessity to do so.
    If not destiny, chance.
    All lives are connected even if by distinction.

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    Very nice! Short and to the point. Well done, Peace...Jul

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    I agree, this is concentrated to remove distractions from the intent. Nicely penned.
    There's nothing like a simile.

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    Quote Originally Posted by astroannie View Post
    I agree, this is concentrated to remove distractions from the intent. Nicely penned.
    Thank you! I was halfway scared to post it.

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    Quo vadis?
    A man in possession of a wooden spoon must be in want of a pot to stir.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bloggsworth View Post
    Quo vadis?
    Romam vado iterum crucifigi? I hope not.


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