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    Funesto

    Funesto

    The silver lining turns to ash.

    In my childhood
    I remember the bells
    around the neck of a cat
    and the window that separated me
    from it.

    And I wanted nothing more.

    Then when my soul had matured
    there was a girl.
    I remember the blue ribbon in her red hair
    the song in her voice
    and the fear that kept me
    from having her.

    And I wanted nothing more.

    Later, when I am old and alone
    I attended the trial of a serial killer.
    At his sentencing he spit on the mother of the murdered
    and there was nothing separating me
    from him.

    And I wanted nothing more.

    The scars were like scales on his neck
    my hands were like clamps on his wind pipe
    the life escaping from his pale face
    his clawing fingers scratching at my hands

    And I wanted nothing more.

    guards as they pulled me off
    a gun I stole from the belt
    bullets that tore through the room
    a killer that was saved
    from me.

    As the silver lining turned to ash.

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    Wow !!!You packed a whole novel in a few action packed lines---I am impressed! You went from innocence to murder ...So intrigued am I. If this were a prologue to a book---I would be spending my money for this one! Very clever of you to end this poem with the opening line...Peace...Jul

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