Thread: Begining Of A Short Epic Peice PART I - THE SECRET DINNER PARTY

Not SURE IF I'm Allowed to do this but all dialect is seperated between the two characters by paragraph setting






Debating The Dark Spots

The van der between

Your quantized eyes are sweet

And I’m not sure if I should move closer

Or if it would matter

That the effects ofmy interference

Would then make me Bohr

But we could argue over marble cakes

And search for dark places inbetween

Mistakenly convincing you

How everything will be alright

For the Taste
Your integument is taming to my tongue.
Two kinds of wisdom if you follow,
These chapters of Kingdom come,
Earth, and Heaven,and all Kings sung.

He told me selfishness,
Would bid me silenceand due me done.
On boastful voyages,
Across salty riverbed runs.

Mistake me if I’m wrong,
But am I fruitless for the sake of the snake?
Or am I founded upon
The opaque that enraptured
The beauty of our taste?

My mesodermal
Has brought me raged
A blemished pseudo squall.

May I say these words?
Or does my blood coil ungodly entangles
To these branded watered brawls?

If you wanted to talk

On the laws of Durkheim

Or Marx and Weber

Sinoatrial signals that cardiac syntax

Moral and immoral phonemes whose dialect

Drop bricks onto arteries

Or the bronchia sound of each breath

That noises anomic like natural selection

To choose what air tobreath

What winds to share?

The Aristotelian teleological

That has become necessary to such nature

To the movements of your mouth

And the superstructure of my heart

The dynamics of thisbody

And to the infrastructure that created it

Cleaning Houses
The view from my windows
Are not the same
They are not filled with the constellations
Once embodied upon them

I want to break them down
A shattered mosaic
Just to Catch the Cow Jump over the moon

But I’d be too afraid of her bowing ties
That would beat us both to the green

Only then would I be able to gaze across
The astronomical sailings
Of a starry filled sky

Like a homeless man in the dumps
Preaching blues to newlyweded wives
Like it hasn’t already been done

It’s disgusting,
The view from my window
Doped down on Ambien’s
Falling asleep to Now I Lay Me’s
Filling in the excuses as to why they didn’t work

If only I could crank the cracking’s between
My faded drapes and curtains

But I’m too glued to the folding chairs
To morph into the models of that broken window dream


















The Pride Of Men

Field works dimly camouflage attrition

These pomegranate hands who cultivate

Trenches of dusk squeal to those lesser seen


In Labyrinths of detachment

We feed upon this which but only grows

These pomegranate hands who cultivate


Our strength is swoon but stars do also rise

From our hands we pass on to daybreaks next

We feed upon this which but only grows


Our march is marsh, to scavenge the land

And when demised the green for moments

From our hands we pass on to daybreaks next


And in that moment of such starry watch

Thus bares the seeds to that of all we strive

Though strength still meek through stripe of strife

We stature ourselves upon what we heap

Lost In Translation
If my swallowed breath to whistled fall airs
No longer does justice to tricks pigeons play
Noted by passerby’s of such humble greys

Then the tectonics of these oceans of mine
Have drowned any clear path between you and I

And If I could catch the words again and again
By the opening of blinds between tongues
I would feel as though the seas would much dryer now

But even pigeons have mastered such silence
And I’m not sure howmuch more to swallow
To get to you to see what I need you to see
Or how far for me to go to get you there

it might be kinda difficult to read and i dont want anyone to be thrown off, so ill give an idea

the aim was to be two generals debating a war grant for the overcoming capitalism in one of their countrys
the begining can be a little difficult to read and i dont want you guys caught up in wikipedia that can have anything on there

Bohr was a quantum mechanist who had critical debates with Einstien on quantum physics and urged Roosevelt into a nuclear warfare back in the 1940s
Integument is a armor layer skin/skale/feather of the animal exoskeleton
Mesodermal is the begining layers of the skeletal, muscle and skin layers in the early embryo
Durkheim Marx and Weber Forefathers of Capitalism
Sinotrail The SA Node responsible as a pace maker for the heart
Teleology The philisophical belief that one aspect of nature effects the rest of nature
Broken Window Theory a sociological theory or expirement that if one man breaks a law of ethics then so will the next man

Niels Bohr was a Danish physicist, and he didn' urge Roosevelt into any nuclear warfare. Rather he urged that the nuclear development around the world should be under the same organisation, to prevent weapons from actually being used. He got his wish after it was too late I'm afraid. Besides that, some believe he played a significant role in persuading Sweden to help rescue the Danish Jews from the Nazis who had occupied Denmark. I'm Danish myself and we learn a lot about Niels Bohr, so your use of him struck me as somewhat inaccurate...

I am slowly working my way through these, as they are pretty heavy reading. Just wanted you to know that they aren't being ignored, but it may well take most of us a while to absorb them.

Thanks Martin for ur clarification I knew he was asked into British at the time the Nazis were invading but declined the offer at the time to protect his mother and then later left when things became dangerous it was an interesting time I was u should watch the movie iq it ur into physics I was watching bits n prices the other day it's a compelling story if ur interested

Britian sorry on my phone

Without your explanation I would have thought that this was a romantic conversation between a man and woman.

I think you have some very nice work here, but to be honest, it may be hard to get feedback on them posted as they are. It's a bit overwhelming.