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    Prolific Writer feralpen's Avatar
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    Visions in Twilight

    Visions in Twilight

    In anticipation I search the twilight

    as the horizon dims
    you come to me in purples


    once the sun has slipped its golden sabers
    into that sheath which nighttime holds
    I await you …


    your step is soft
    it stirs the lilac and sends me a fragrance
    my senses awaken, quiver


    your vision tempts
    I need the beauty
    the sanctity of your bosom


    bared


    wanton breath vaults breasts clefted shadows
    licking at your neck
    turned to catch last light


    curved


    inviting


    reaching out to my lips


    moments pass into violet
    eyes are blurred
    but not the touch


    virile on velvet,
    mauveine emotion,
    sighs fallen from mulberry lips …


    colors fade into memories
    purple ever the last to go
    your parting sculpture remains in my eyes


    I reach out
    your promise abides
    you are there for me


    in twilight
    I once read the back of a box of saltines. The grammar, spelling and punctuation were all perfect. The contents, however were a little bland for my taste. ~ feralpen


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    This is a very dark, sexy poem !! Love your very vivid ,gorgeous imagery." Sighs fallen from mulberry lips "---Too beautiful! Love the genteel erotic nature, handled sooo elegantly...Now--I need to go smoke a cigarette ...peace...Jul

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    Prolific Writer feralpen's Avatar
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    Morning Jul;

    There are touches we know but cannot have. The memory, the visions are, sometimes all we have to cling to. Thank you for reading. I'm pleasantly surprised that you got the dark connotation. None before you has.

    fp
    I once read the back of a box of saltines. The grammar, spelling and punctuation were all perfect. The contents, however were a little bland for my taste. ~ feralpen


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