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    uniting ourselves

    imagine we were just parts
    of a single person
    how would this person
    collect his thoughts

    which would be suppressed
    and which allowed to run free
    with all his warring parts
    how would he know who to be.

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    A subtle confrontation with the ego. I really like the hypothetical inquiry you start with. Makes us have to decide. For me we're all part of the same, and until we all realize that, humanity will be warring and running around ourselves. Much enjoyed as always and nice to read you again, Firebird.
    Last edited by Martin; 10-21-2011 at 10:35 PM.

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    A message that we all need to think about today. I like how you wrote "parts of a single person", we really are one, but still so disconnected.
    Nice work, was a pleasure to read.
    “The greatest achievement was at first and for a time a dream. The oak sleeps in the acorn, the bird waits in the egg, and in the highest vision of the soul a waking angel stirs. Dreams are the seedlings of realities.” ~ James Allen

    "Use what talents you possess: the woods would be very silent if no birds sang there except those that sang best." ~ Henry Van Dyke


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