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    Inspiration is a Night Swollen with Wasps and Pears

    I move my fingers
    over your wrist
    and pluck a pear
    from your pulse.

    I place it beneath
    our bed, next to
    the jar of fireflies
    we found last July,

    next to the dictionary
    swollen with pressed
    flower petals and
    black ants, next

    to the mandolin
    strings humming
    like a pocketful
    of hymns. You

    weave a red wasp
    from all the words
    spilling out from
    my teeth and place

    it on my chest.
    Watch it corrode
    me like a chain
    thrown into an ocean.

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    I love this intriguing , melancholy poem.The imagery is stunning--stanza 2--3-and 4--beautiful! Then the final stanza--breathtaking, well done. Peace...Jul

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    Nice and unique blend of images: fruit, insects, books... it all elicits a certain mood - the exact meaning escapes me, but it is a delightful piece -
    ---todd
    A growing collection of writings at my blog: Poems and Vignettes
    Also check out the latest installment of The Catholic Sojourner

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