Thread: solemly declare

walking up the isle
surreal as a lyle
working out the tire
the day ahead has filed,
remembering the layets
a face, a name, a prayet,
did he keep up with Sires
did she trim up a diet?
will he, will she, regardless,
follow in suits and manners
to each other in thoughts
for this is day of awe?
will he forsee all others
will she keep up in favours
will he ever and never
deliver in ring entire
to cherish and to hold
to this moment and all?
will she be done to be
will he do forth in honour
to have them both encherish
in smiles and in further
a duet so long endeavoured?
tradition has it either
to speak up or to plunder
for silence is a splendour
delivered in such a force
that time has it
to stand up
in songs, in praise and voice
under the arc of haute
forever and fortetold
and so may they be promised
in sanctity and health
a life endeared and loved.

Move aside The Oxford English Dictionary, hello The New Nacian Dicionary...

Originally Posted by Bloggsworth

Move aside The Oxford English Dictionary, hello The New Nacian Dicionary...

lol..I have indeed made some recorrections.

That's how it starts, for sure. With hope, but with so many questions to be answered. If you are lucky, the answers are usually what you hoped for, and you last in love. Very nice!

Just one thing: I believe you mean "forsake" here, not "foresee." (will he forsee all others...)

Originally Posted by Phyllis

That's how it starts, for sure. With hope, but with so many questions to be answered. If you are lucky, the answers are usually what you hoped for, and you last in love. Very nice!

Just one thing: I believe you mean "forsake" here, not "foresee." (will he forsee all others...)

thank you Phyllis for taking time to read my poem. I believe foresee all others, as in being the one and only.
they say there are plenty of fish in the sea and this will he forsee them all, meaning he won't have to worry that there are many out there, temptations and all.

Not sure about your examples, but the word FORESEE means to guess what is coming in the future. FORSAKE is used to mean having one and only one and giving up all others. Check the dictionary online to be sure you have the word you really want. I may just be misunderstanding what you want to say in the poem, but here is an example of each anyway.

She could foresee success at this company, so she took the job.
He promised in his wedding vows to love only her, forsaking all others.

foresee in this poem means foreseeing temptations and other contenders, being aware of them, and so his partner won't fall into them is what I mean, to foresee as in ''to be aware of'' what might be and succeeding in diffusing those possibilities.

Dear Nacian--This is so complex and rich--like a huge slice of wedding cake. You have to nibble on it and keep going back to enjoy all the wonderful subtle and delicate textures and flavors. I loved this so much, I did not leave one tiny crumb on my plate... Maybe...oh yeah---I am going to have seconds.! Peace my friend.Jul

dear Firemajic your words are simply magic..I enjoyed reading your post very much