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    Food.


    Chef, move left
    Let me get the greens
    in the stove. Try not to sneeze
    as i heat it up
    to four fifty degrees
    Damn, I split some
    on my knees.
    *whew* Now that the job is done
    On to the next


    The customer that got a Bowl
    O Gumbo said "Yum!"
    when she passed by the window
    She enjoyed it, as
    she watched two dumbos
    fight over a plate of
    fried whiting. Now the cops
    are asking me for chop sticks
    to finish their Chow mein
    and string beans they picked up
    at the restaurant on Means Street

    Here comes more customers
    they want more food to
    stimulate the mind and spirit
    not miracle whip. Time to
    pour some strawberry Limeade in these cups,
    despite the fact that
    the batch of greens
    are overdone. "Ah well...
    time to dump another one.
    It ain't no fun going to
    the dumpster out side!" I said
    First, i wanna serve up
    this side of sweet potato fries.
    Chef is pissed though
    so hes rippin that out my check!
    Hit the deck. Hes on a rage. His
    face, red hot, More red then
    Texas Pete hot sauce. What
    a loss of a job!
    Last edited by Ouroboros-A; 09-29-2011 at 01:38 AM.

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    yall might find this one lame tho... T_T

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    Not lame at all. I enjoyed the read. I like

    "Now the cops
    are asking me for chop sticks
    to finish their Chow mein
    and string beans they picked up
    at the restaurant on Means Street
    "

    among other parts. Just one question: What does the last confusing sentence mean? Did you intend to use the word "lost?" Did the guy get fired?

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    This was very entertaining Good write, I think you meant "loss" though not "lost".

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    Quote Originally Posted by Phyllis View Post
    Not lame at all. I enjoyed the read. I like

    "Now the cops
    are asking me for chop sticks
    to finish their Chow mein
    and string beans they picked up
    at the restaurant on Means Street
    "

    among other parts. Just one question: What does the last confusing sentence mean? Did you intend to use the word "lost?" Did the guy get fired?

    Quote Originally Posted by Fossie View Post
    This was very entertaining Good write, I think you meant "loss" though not "lost".
    Yes just a dumb mistake i made >_<

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