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    I woke up today to a glorious Monday

    I woke up today
    to a glorious Monday,
    with holy water falling
    to bless my poor anxious head.
    The traffic was slow and serene,
    prompting me to recollect
    how oddly frantic these people are,
    scrambling to arrive
    at a job they despise,
    surrounding themselves
    with people who have not
    their happiness in mind.
    But tomorrow will be bright and clear,
    the traffic will flow freely along,
    and my mind will spin again
    like all those wheels,
    rolling here and there
    with never a care, for me.
    Last edited by toddm; 09-19-2011 at 05:09 PM.
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    awesome man. i really liked this! while reading this, i was remembering my morning, and ended up relating alot!

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    Very sweet poem...lots of energy in the words.
    This caught my eye...very religious indeed.
    I woke up today
    to a glorious Monday,

    with holy water falling
    to bless my poor anxious head

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    There is no question that you are a Master craftsman . That is why I always look forward to reading your poems. It is always with a sense of wonder and delight,, I know when you write this type of poetry--I am about to go somewhere special...and when I return--I will have been changed....Peace...Jul

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    So many great phrases here. I love your work and plan to find more of it here to enjoy

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    Quote Originally Posted by Phyllis View Post
    So many great phrases here. I love your work and plan to find more of it here to enjoy
    thanks, I will be checking out your poems as well -
    ---todd
    A growing collection of writings at my blog: Poems and Vignettes
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