My Favourtie King

**Nacian** · 09-10-2011, 09:43 PM

The greatest of them all
is King Henry the Eight
of noble queens and kings
Such a courageous knight
In such a resilient time
His face is absolute
His smiles is his charms
His aura is his height
His bravery is weighed
with gold and silver plated
His chivalry is radiant
His reptutation stands
across the seas and mountains
His courts are painted magic
His floats are written tales
His ships are his command
His clothing is unique
His stytle is his hype
His armour is to die for
His language is his sword
His power is his words
and so to this proclaimed
His rights over his faith
His ever standing Church
that is of England come
His terrotries are rich
feathered across the land
and so may live his people
His castles and his name
and forever may resound
His title and his crown
across the World and more.

**Trides** · 09-10-2011, 09:53 PM

resiliant -> resilient
absolut -> absolute, unless Henry had a face full of vodka
heigth -> height
laiden -> ??
reptutation -> reputation
"His floats are written tales" ?? At my school, a float is a when a student meets a teacher during a free period and they discuss material not fully understood in class.
"His stytle is his hype" ??
"His language is his sword
His powers are his words" So if his powers are his words and his language is his sword, then his powers are his sword. o_O
"and so to this proclaimed
His rights over His faith
His ever standing Church
that is of England come" Huh?

Also, I do not understand your capitalization of "His." Did you switch from talking about Henry to talking about God?

**Nacian** · 09-10-2011, 10:02 PM

Hi Trides thank you for correcting my spellings I am terrible ..I am trying to ensure it does not happent too much
See changes.
About the capitals I thought because he was a king then he deserves capitalisation??
Kingdom come
England come an expression see

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