Thread: Heavenly

Time fizzles through
sprinkling jewls of sounds
of skies rivers and hays
drizzling hymns of daze
on beds of splashing waves
fluttering autums leaves
refereshing buds of seeds
Oh how seasonally drenched!!
are the darling fields of fay.

Well---what can I say except ---this is heavenly...from your first 2 lines, my eyes were glazing over with pleasure. This sounds like a poem of praise to the world---a celebration of words. "Time fizzles through sprinkling jewels of sound" such a wonderfully unique way you have of pairing words together---and it works!! I just don't know how you do it....but I am soooo glad you do it. Peace...Jul

Hey all the pleasure is mine..
You make all the diffference when you read it Firemajic!

Another winner here - I like your style
but I would like to hear you actually say that you are intentionally misspelling words and twisting them a bit with poetic license - that is fine if you are
if it is otherwise, you should fix the spelling : )
"jewls", "hays", "autums leaves", "refereshing", "drunched", "fields of fay"

Please read "Jabberwocky" by Lewis Carroll, you will like that one I think : )
---todd

Originally Posted by toddm

Another winner here - I like your style
but I would like to hear you actually say that you are intentionally misspelling words and twisting them a bit with poetic license - that is fine if you are
if it is otherwise, you should fix the spelling : )
"jewls", "hays", "autums leaves", "refereshing", "drunched", "fields of fay"

Please read "Jabberwocky" by Lewis Carroll, you will like that one I think : )
---todd

Hi toddm...thank you helping me perfect mywork.
Some of my spelling is deliberate. Fay/hay will stay as it is acceptable to spell them so.
I corrected the others..thank you again.
I will from now ensure everything is correct...unless it is deliberate then I will mention so..
Thank you again.

PS *I am now going to read Jabberwocky*