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    Smile Infinite

    The happy medium they say
    Is that all there is?
    How about Yes and No?
    I like it and I don't
    Are these something to veer?

    I rarely count my days
    let alone hymnes in phase
    are these signals of mere
    or something in between?

    The simple things in life
    are promises of deeds
    are we supposed to clear
    these mountains of beliefs?


    There's a saying in each pier
    and there's layings ephemere
    are we asking too much
    or is there more to hear?

    It is never too late
    and yes you may see fit
    are you getting that deal
    that instinct that feels real?

    The tickle of this rime
    is a story of two sides
    the one who flew the nest
    and the one that made it first


    So there you go you say
    there is nothing to fear
    I like my different ways
    this way and that way

    I like it blue today
    it might be autre again
    a happy medium grey
    and best of all the rays

    A mind can never set
    in all the wonders of best
    life is too enriched
    to settle for just It

    So take up all your seats
    for there is more to please
    then what let's out the Neil's
    to this great founded scene.
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    Hi Ash thank for youe vey constructive and enjoyable comments.
    And yes the ''recursion does lend itself to the title''...very clever thing to say I must admit...I did not even notice..
    I write my poem then I put the title and sometimes I don't even know why such title..crazy I know

    PS 'recursion'..how very odd indeed...I laughed too...

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    I'm utterly confused... explain?
    High school = much work = procrastination = mother shouting = shouting back at mother

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    Where do I start??
    It is just a poem and it is mainly about no having to always chose as life is always full of other, better, more, etc...
    About wanting this that way and the other.....just a play on word??

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    Infinitely intriguing... As always---a mind bending exercise in coming to grips with what you are saying....OH--my head hurrrttts! Love it though... Peace...Jul

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