Thread: Simplicity

My Suggestion.

Is to remember your reason for writing the poem the way you did.
Also try not to get so far removed from your reason, when you edit it.

The only problem I truly had with it, was trying to figure out how to read it.

As written, this is the way it looks.

Amasing how the world goes by without a care in the world of my if only you could see how the words fly such a panting of strokes and sways it is of the most intringuing plays of colours and songs and rays.

Could not figure out how to read it.

This is quite splendid. I don't think I could have suggested anything that Silvermoon already has. However, I will ask one question which is bugging me about this: why did you spell 'Amazing' 'Amasing'? Even phonetically it sounds way off...

Hi Vasioth thank you for lovely comments.
The reason I spell/spelt amasing with S is because it derives from the French word: Amuser.
As a French speaker and in French, an S between two vowels is always pronouced Z.
Hence my spelling.
So for example I would pronounce your name Vazioth.