Thread: Constant

Eventful
so is my pen
my words carefully planned

Revival
so is my time
my realms are ever so real

Substantial
so is my lines
gripping and tilted it feels

Regardless
so is my thoughts
that says it all or so my dear

Rebellious
so is my walk
the roads are so endlessly flaws


Imagine
so is my joy
filling my very gracious cup


Remindful
so is my turn
to speak till dawn comes up fall

I think this piece could benefit from some punctuation. Also, couple things:

Eventfull

One L.

Revival
so is my time
my realms are ever so real

Your time is revival? Your time is A revival? Your time is revived? Are they two different ideas? This is why I think punctuation would help. A bit of a stumble for me. Not sure about "ever so" either.

Substantial
so is my lines
greeping and tilted it feels

Should be "are." I realize this might break your form, but it was smacking me in the face.

Regardless
so is my thoughts
that says it all or so my dear

Again, "is" should be "are." And I'm not sure about the "my dear" part tagged on at the end.

Rebellious
so is my walk
the roads are so endlessly flaws

Flawed? Typo?

Definitely some editing to be done with this, but I think it has potential.

Hi Angel 101.
Thank you for that! Very much appreciated.