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    Scrivener Hoot08's Avatar
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    Verlaine's V

    She's forever beneath bliss,
    with that mane power.
    slave to the sweet rarely
    kissed

    The debauching fiery cascade,
    priests in disarray, remorseless

    Her cantor is humble for
    certain, an enchanted
    mouth beneath the sheets,
    from head to stem
    the ugliness with pure golden
    lilies light, flame-lit, with
    lilac bellies, a mad
    release

    And the roses white, wild
    at purest rest

    Her breast, back, haunches,
    Sweet thighs, Venus flair,
    Red body harmonious, smoother
    To me than fleece!

    And the sanctuary's holy doors

    The darling is
    master, damning your bed
    White to toe

    Glows

    Pink circle before the body
    but to me, mine feast to feast.
    Your bed sings and holds
    the hand of a pleasing taut
    blonde
    "I want to work in revelations, not just spin silly tales for money. I want to fish as deep down as possible into my own subconscious in the belief that once that far down, everyone will understand because they are the same that far down"
    - Jack Kerouac

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    wow enticing! I like this a lot, only thing is haunches seemed to throw the flow a bit for me - overall la great piece, keep up the good work!

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