Thread: Night and Day

Night and Day


A glow of light clinging on the horizon
Crafting beautiful colour across the morning sky
To mark a new beginning
The light slowly gain strength

The sun crosses the land
Shining proudly

But brings shadow
Clinging to where it can hide

Now it makes it farewells
The sky as beautiful as it was when the day began
Light drains away until no more
Until only a memory is left

With the dominion of the sun over
Only distant lights over a darken world remains
To show even in the darkest of places
Light will still burn
Until another day

Well, there are a few typos and such in this, which makes parts of it difficult to follow. I would look at your subject/verb agreement, punctuation, and tenses.