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    Hearsay

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    I love your imagery here. Very powerful. And great use of rhythm and the line. Your last line is my favorite. "Schythed" is such an excellent verb.
    Poets are always taking the weather so personally. They're always sticking their emotions in things that have no emotions.

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    Very nice indeed, i agree with the above statement great imagery and rhythm. Keep up the good work !

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    Splendid poem. There's a lot to like. I enjoyed the imagery of the opening lines. The use of various line lengths works well in this poem. Wonderful directed imagery to the final line. The title gives a good lead into the topic. I would read this again. Regards;

    jeffrey

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