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Last edited by Bloggsworth; 09-08-2011 at 09:37 PM.
I love your imagery here. Very powerful. And great use of rhythm and the line. Your last line is my favorite. "Schythed" is such an excellent verb.
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Very nice indeed, i agree with the above statement great imagery and rhythm. Keep up the good work !
Splendid poem. There's a lot to like. I enjoyed the imagery of the opening lines. The use of various line lengths works well in this poem. Wonderful directed imagery to the final line. The title gives a good lead into the topic. I would read this again. Regards;
jeffrey
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