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Last edited by Nick; 06-18-2011 at 05:56 PM.
Without God, all is night, and with him light is useless. - Emil Cioran
we're --> we've... I think.
Not sure what "held the pen to you" entails, butpoem! Reminds me of me, as all awesome poems do.awesome
High school = much work = procrastination = mother shouting = shouting back at mother
Thanks for pointing out the typo, Trides, and thank you very much for the compliment. The line 'held the pen to you' is because the friend I wrote with this in mind was always very reluctant to write at all, though I still think he is a wonderful writer, and I used to urge him when we were growing up to write more.Originally Posted by Trides
Without God, all is night, and with him light is useless. - Emil Cioran
Nostalgic and very nice. some really great lines-this one in particular --I'll leave my touch blind on the keys-Thanks-Jul
I love nostalgia. The first lines of each stanza are great and they really help provide a nice rhythm to the piece.
Poets are always taking the weather so personally. They're always sticking their emotions in things that have no emotions.
Check out my new blog, complete with new poetry! - http://www.writingforums.com/blogs/squalid-glass/
Makes me nostalgic too. Loved this one.
“The greatest achievement was at first and for a time a dream. The oak sleeps in the acorn, the bird waits in the egg, and in the highest vision of the soul a waking angel stirs. Dreams are the seedlings of realities.” ~ James Allen
"Use what talents you possess: the woods would be very silent if no birds sang there except those that sang best." ~ Henry Van Dyke
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