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    Six Years Old Today

    Six years of sharing her smile
    So bright, so wonderful
    Captivating all who look upon her
    Causing happy beams in return

    Six years of her beauty
    Which encompasses all
    Shining from deep within
    Her tiny, extraordinary heart

    Six years of her joy
    Bringing forth a happiness
    That could never run cold
    Creating a rainbow for all to see

    Six years of her laughter
    Perfect and lyrical
    There isn't a sound quite like it
    Tickling from within her little frame

    Six years of her intelligence
    Far beyond her years
    Questions asked that baffle the grey haired
    Creativity colouring her every thought

    Six years old today
    Excitement bouncing throughout her
    Parties, cakes and presents
    A special day for an extra special little girl.

    *Written for my man's little angel*

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    How adorable! Well done-you have a nice melodic flow to the poem , and after reading this-I know she is a special "Little Angel "

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    Thank you so much Firemajic

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    this is a cute poem, sounds like she can light up any room... very well said.

    wood

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    Thank you very much wood. She really does!

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    Vary nice poem! great work , if I mist the chance, Happy B-Day to the lil angel XD

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    Thank you very much Chiefspider

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    Just beautiful! I raised a little girl and can relate to it so well. It's one of the rare happy poems here, or anywhere. Glad I found it!

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    Thank you so much Phyllis. I am so glad you enjoyed it.

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