Thread: A female thing [adult content]

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I find this very intriguing. The language is perfectly sensual, and the eroticism of the imagery is arresting.

a fine jeweled spine

Such a delicious image.

Really enjoyed it.

Awesome poem. I initially misread the libido line:

a piano tune, desire’s notes & syllables — LI-BI-DO, LI-BI-DO

as

a piano tune, desire’s notes & syllables — LI-BI-DO, LI-BI-DOO.
(Lie-Bee-Dough, Lie-Bee-Dew)

as apposed to what you have actually written (Lie-Bee-Dough, Lie-Bee-Dough).

Although I was obviously mistaken, I feel compelled to suggest an edit based on that misread. It helps emphasize the musically playful sensuality of that last line.

Of course there are other ways to pronounce it, so take my suggestion with salt.

Fine stuff (pun maybe intended).

A poem to get the blood pumping! Your alliterations made the poem flow so smoothly:

mined from too many men-caves, / red-hot rose / lusty liver / opium, an opening / sticks...sex / strawberries...spoons

Very....stimulating.