Thread: When the Muses Breathe

It's so striking
when the Muses breathe.................................................. ................away ~
through the forests .................................................. .............and
of our minds: .................................................. ........wildly
The .................................................. ..............fly
. ......thoughts........................................and
. ........................stir.................leaves
. ...................................like

I like it! For me-I love poetry that is not bogged down with alot of words.clean and straight to the point-let MY mind do the rest..Your imagery is wonderful-and my mind will do the rest..Thank you-peace -Jul

Originally Posted by Firemajic

I like it! For me-I love poetry that is not bogged down with alot of words.clean and straight to the point-let MY mind do the rest..Your imagery is wonderful-and my mind will do the rest..Thank you-peace -Jul

thanks, I hope the format/layout was readable as I intended -

sometimes I like to cover pages over with words, but I've noticed sometimes the most effective writing for me is the simpler and pared down - I'm glad you liked the imagery, thanks

---todd