Thread: The Act of Standing by a Window and Staring Out

Todd, you "hit the nail on the head" as they say. We've all been there, and can easily relate to your words. Concise, creates a picture and mood that can't be mistaken. I especially love this line: "your breath
clouding the view of life on the outside" Yes, loneliness and depression is like living in a fog, separated from the outside world (by the pane of glass, or the pain inside). Well done!

thanks Phyllis, glad you liked it - I'm glad I'm in a better place now, grew through that time though.
I'm pleased that you found the piece effective in conveying the mood.
---todd