Thread: I Did Not Move

Something about losing it, I suppose.


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SG, I like that this poem is sparse. In so little words you get across a sense of the lonely. Then at the end I wonder if a little madness is going on due to such isolation. I may be entirely off the mark so would you kindly fill me in?

you make insanity seem a bit peaceful here : )
I like the economy of words here too -

A gentle "losing it" and a sense of giving up caring anymore.

I did not move;
I did not try
to stop it.

I think you could lose the second "I"

Thanks for the kind words, all. Silvermoon - yes, you hit the nail on the head.