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    When I was king

    The work of food
    The checkpoint of beeping
    An undesirable uniform
    To go with undesirable work

    I was born a fool
    But it would seem I am still a fool
    But with only a few more pennies to my name
    No longer a king
    If only he had a brain
    But it seem too later for this brainless king

    I was the king of my people
    My castle, a concrete prison of knowledge
    I was respected
    I was feared
    By adults
    By fellow child
    But no longer would it seem

    I recall peasants of my castle
    Being a lack of confidence
    I had thought myself better then what my peasants are
    But little did I know it was bravely


    Now, they, ruling over me
    The kings and queens of my world now
    Just makes me think
    When I was king

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    I don't quite understand this poem, but I do like the mood of it.

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