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    Visited by a Good Fairy

    This is a strange and too-short poem. I'd like to write more but I can't seem to come up with anything else. Feedback?

    Visited by a Good Fairy


    You forgot to drink your daily coffee
    But your good fairy gave you a new-fangled potion.
    She replaced your mouse with a bar of soap
    And your keyboard with two square waffles.

    Your glasses have been cleaned!
    The doors and windows are open!
    Your fairy has Sharpies in a rainbow of colors
    So just ask for the hues you will need!

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    Interesting surreal kind-of.
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    hm - funny and unique - not what I expected
    what was in that "new fangled potion" anyway?

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    Quote Originally Posted by toddm View Post
    hm - funny and unique - not what I expected
    what was in that "new fangled potion" anyway?
    Thank you. And as for the potion...
    ... who knows? Probably some kind of enchanted hallucinogen... or maybe just sunshine and rainbows.

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