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    autumn leaves

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    There is a quiet pride and joy
    in being an autumn leaf --


    they get to change their hues
    then off they go in flight
    to form a beautiful landscape
    and help fertilise tomorrow's trees


    then once again come autumn time
    unfurl their wings unto the breeze.









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    Insert pithy saying here.

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    Very nice word play, such a pretty image Ricky. Much enjoyed.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gumby View Post
    Very nice word play, such a pretty image Ricky. Much enjoyed.
    Thank you Cindy,
    at times the simple and straightforward is the best approach. Cheers, Ricky
    Insert pithy saying here.

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    Absolutely beautiful, Ricky, how I do so love fall. The simplicity and journey full circle work extremely well. Thanks so much for sharing this one.

    Best,
    Lisa

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    Hi Arkayye,

    a simple but quite effective little poem, and I like how you rhymed trees with breeze; I can hear them rustling now.

    Thanks for sharing it.

    Saucerful

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