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dry and hardened
water poured upon
moist, it became.
#2 -
Fire torched the sky
man became many
Few remained resilliant,
others, feld the sea.
#3 -
In the light, shadows glow
mountains rise to the moon
sand brims beauty air.
My mind as a sponge,
dry and hardened
water poured upon
moist, it became.
#2 -
Fire torched the sky
man became many
Few remained resilliant,
others, feld the sea.
#3 -
In the light, shadows glow
mountains rise to the moon
sand brims beauty air.
I like the pictures painted in these pieces. They're mundane things given a different light and a deeper meaning. The wordplay was brilliant, too, like it was verging on Haiku.
The first is definitely my favorite.
Oh, and one more thing:
I assume this was "fled?"others, feld the sea.
You don't stop playing because you're getting old; you get old because you stop playing.
- Doyle Brunson
@Kriegskanzler | Kanzler's Tales | Motley Press
Yes, you have managed to create beautiful images in my mind with just a few words.
It is good to read your comments.
Yes, I do meant fled.
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