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    Hand-Me-Down

    A hand-me-down heart with a faltering beat
    and a wheezing breath that’s dumb.
    Staggering slowly back to my feet,
    what have you left me to become?

    You left me a spirit, evaporating;
    now drained to the dregs.

    Did you ever think what road I’d drive?
    Or if I’d even leave the lay-by
    on the two collapsed lungs you left me for tyres?
    I never did reach you that day before tears
    fizzed out your dying eyes’ fires.


    And all that’s left is a broken bottle,
    that I tried to catch before it smashed.

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    One thing, who is the person in the poem talking about?

    Besides that, short and sweet and very deep.

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