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    Scrivener Boddaert's Avatar
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    Love is

    We began with the corners;
    the smile, the word, the touch, the kiss,
    filling the spaces between with straight edges,
    made fun by the curves on opposite sides.

    We picked from our jumble of experiences
    the jigs we thought might fit,
    learning together which bits matched,
    those to throw away.

    After completing our love-saw,
    clicking the last emotion into place,
    and no longer needing the guide,
    we hugged and discarded the box.

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    nice use of metaphor - delightful

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