Thread: I Have No Title

I have no title for this
poem, but it is addressed to
you
I hope this poem with no title
goes to you

You know I love you more
than anything, I love you
so much that your love creates a
miasma around my heart

A love that hurts to much
If I don't love you, if I loose you
I don't think I could remember
to love

I wouldn't be able to love anyone
the way I love you
I feel I am losing you in this sea
I was the fish you caught in that wide sea,
but now after so long you've decided
to set me free

Things aren't going well I know it
I know it because I'm frustrated, but
maybe I am frustrated because I love
you to much

I promised I wouldn't leave and I promised
to be a better man for you
But I just cannot seem to pull it off
And I am only hurting you

Maybe our decisions weren't right?
Maybe we aren't as much of soulmates as I
like think?
Maybe I am just using you to fill a piece of my soul
that went missing years ago

I don't know any more
This poem has no title for its
as confused as we are
I love you I know I love you, I can feel
I love you
I love you so much to the point that I
cannot breath

But I don't know if we can do this
the way we use to any more

Sentimentality... some people like it, others don't. I'm particularly not a fan.

I would suggest cutting this down. I would also look to make some of your words less cliche. "I love you more than anything" doesn't really provoke anything in the reader. How else can you say that, in a way that hasn't been said a million times, and in a way that gives us a measurable sense of how strong your love really is?

This was more a therapuatic poem, than it was going for any kind of style.