Thread: Liquid Bliss (potentially offensive language)

Okay first off I want to say that this poem is something I never thought I would be posting ANYWHERE. I came back across it today and I'm just looking for some reactions.

Trust me, this poem isn't beautiful, it wasn't written to be great or to adhere to the rules. So I'm sure that its mostly terrible but I'm curious so...

Here goes.

Liquid Bliss

What if we stopped peeing?
Like we evolved past the need to do it,
How detrimental would that be to us as humans?

Would we miss that private time?
Just us, our junk, and the toilet,
It is like a meditation.

What about that feeling of relief,
When you’ve been holding it for an hour,
And finally you can release the burden,
And it comes rushing out,
Liquid bliss is in my piss.

Don’t worry,
Humans still do have to piss,
This is simply asking the question of what if?

Hey Jeff,

Despite the very odd theme, a futuristic question comes along: what does one do in an event like this?

cute poem. I read this a while ago and didn't comment, but the sentiment has been in my mind the last few times i've...gone. haha nice job.