Thread: tell me who are you

tell me who are you

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couch my hand ,
and tell me who i am
between the sky and snow
i am one of these two
either me or you
I taught the sea how to be blue
tell me who are you
I can feel the leaves of flowers
when they joke our eyes
and laughing with our hearts
they are doing just like we do
tell me who are you
no one knows that who we are
to the moon we go
near or far
tell me just the true
tell me who are you

raheem toshwell

Couch my hand? Er, what do you want to portray with that phrase?

Same problem with "Tell me just the true."

Other than that, what did you want to show here, God talking to one of his creations? Like that passage in Job? If so, then this could work well. Some awkward wordings in various spots, just like I mentioned.