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    A blissful riddle

    In the beginning, everything is cloudy
    follow through and there I am
    at the end of every feeling.

    I turn anger into hurt,
    have lies transcend away;
    from etching illusion, I'll set you free.

    I'm the bonder of true friendships
    my best friend is love itself
    unconditionally
    without a doubt you know me;

    don't forget,
    don't let just passion fill your head -
    be whisked away
    and it will no longer be me
    there, in the flame.

    When you despair, search within
    I come and go and you'll never know
    I just might be in.

    Enlightening is my game.
    What is my name?
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    Is it truth?

    I had a bit of a problem with this line "or let but passion fill your head" it's a little awkward.

    I don't know much about riddles, but I like this piece.

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    I have to say that I'm intrigued at what the answer is, Martin.

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    Svir, truth is a good guess, and relatable to the answer. I addressed that line that bothered you.

    Cindy, I think I'll let it hang a little longer...

    Thanks both.

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    Loyalty?
    This really makes me think... not my best suit.

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    Is it god?
    I get this because you use these words and phrases, "transcend" "without a doubt you know me" "in the flame." and "Enlightening"

    If it is... I don't know it just sounds very very christian to me. Which actually turns me off. (I believe in a god/goddess but in my own way).
    This, however I really did like,
    In the beginning, everything is cloudy
    follow through and there I am
    at the end of every feeling.
    This is really beautiful and applies to all religions, even all beliefs in general. For a friend of mine the answer to this part of the riddle would be "physics". Which I think is really wonderful.
    Now I lay me down to sleep/
    With every passing thought I weep/
    Lead me into nights dark bliss/
    And let me wake in innocence.
    -Me

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    Prisoner... that's a really good observation.
    If I didn't say it, I have good feelings from that.
    I've never seen this riddling going on before. I like it and I think I'll join in if I can write something today.

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    Intriguing Martin

    Not God or Goddess but maybe faith or belief

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    Okay, how about Reason, or Reasoning?

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    Is it trust?
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    "Understanding" works for me.
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    No hit so far but it's some well interesting guesses. I surely hope the answer will live up to the riddle...

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    Not if you don't tell us!
    Now I lay me down to sleep/
    With every passing thought I weep/
    Lead me into nights dark bliss/
    And let me wake in innocence.
    -Me

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    how about time?

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    Thanks all for your read and answers. The closest guesses I'd say was "truth" and "understanding". In a sense it's a combination of these.

    Now brace yourselves, for the blissful answer is: S i n c e r i t y

    I hope it works, and now as you know the answer, any kind of critique is of course very welcome...

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