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    Eli
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    Fifth Dimensionless

    My current mood seems
    to be all full of issues,
    blank white pages
    with blank in the middle.

    Olive skin faced
    still no better I feel,
    her high yellow eyes
    sure do cause me to yield.

    A letter to her
    in some words I've not spoke
    written on dollars
    and copper bronze hopes.

    Her voice breaks my bank,
    her stride brings me dry,
    her picture removes
    dollar signs from my eye.

    Her Egypt's my comfort,
    her Rome is my build.
    A slave to her cost
    still I work in her fields.

    Her name is Ms.Fifth
    Fifth dimensionless
    I sleep on my waste
    and ask her for a sip.

    My livers her can,
    can it not be trash.
    I drink her,
    Still it seems our joy never last.

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    This is a beautiful poem, Eli! I love the way it flows. Keep your poetry coming.

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