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    Sitting alone on a windswept mountain


    The thoughts that come to are wordless


    Filling me with nothing bat gladness


    Smiling at your infinite grace



    I wait for the inspiration


    In that majestic call to prayer


    A lonely voice calling


    God is great, God is great…



    It is not long till I discover


    Everything is composed of you


    These thoughts, so close to me


    For I have a reason, I have a light



    This is the way I desire


    The path that devotees undergo


    To trample the desire of greed


    Of the empty world below



    If only I had ninety nine mountains


    To engrave your names upon


    To fulfil the lust of submission


    And invoke your divine compassion
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    Quote Originally Posted by enlighten View Post
    Sitting alone on a windswept mountain


    The thoughts that come to are wordless


    Filling me with nothing bat gladness


    Smiling at your infinite grace



    I wait for the inspiration


    In that majestic call to prayer


    A lonely voice calling


    God is great, God is great…



    It is not long till I discover


    Everything is composed of you


    These thoughts, so close to me


    For I have a reason, I have a light



    This is the way I desire


    The path that devotees undergo


    To trample the desire of greed


    Of the empty world below



    If only I had ninety nine mountains


    To engrave your names upon


    To fulfil the lust of submission


    And invoke your divine compassion
    i bolded the two spelling mistakes i saw. other than that, it's a really good poem!
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    --John Milton's Paradise Lost 1:648-649

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    Really enjoyed this. Beautiful passion...

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