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    Ink Blot
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    Many-Night Stand (Language and Sexual content)

    Eyes lock across the bar
    silent agreement passes between
    this time no more than this

    walk to the house
    tension builds
    anticipation
    neither here on false pretense
    this time no more than this
    in the door
    up the stairs
    into the bedroom
    pointless awkward conversation
    situation deja vu
    this time no more than this
    lights off
    strip down
    make a move

    Sweat

    Thrust

    Moan

    Thrust

    Sweat

    R
    E
    L
    E
    A
    S
    E
    this time no more than this
    Purpose served
    Leave
    Get
    Out
    I don’t want you anymore
    this time no more than this
    Last edited by ecarly; 01-13-2011 at 03:31 AM. Reason: formatting off

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    Quite an honest and compelling description of an emotionally complicated situation, with subconscious reasonings repeated throughout. Interesting, in its flow, sequence of thought, and even in its formatting. Thanks for the post.

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