Thread: love

When love hits you
realize it only happens to few
and when you're left dazed and confused
know that no-one really knows what to do

don’t let it go, but don’t let it stew
but once it leaves you – just know
it’s just passing through.

Hi JonM

Love - a difficult theme to write about in the abstract. This feels like you are trying to convince yourself that love comes and goes and be glad you've experienced it but it lacks emotion and a sense of what love is all about, how it really feels.

Your meter is off. The syllable count needs to be the same throughout.

your should be you're

Hello Jon,

I like the message in this poem, how transient love's pain can be.

thanks for the read

Sync

I really like this! So much, that I actually want to copy it and stick it up on my wall to try and remember it as useful advice! Lovely poem x

Thanks for the comments and advise.