Thread: it's not

moving on

Superb and clever short, Sync, wonderful way to premiere, love.

Best,
Lisa

Thank you, Lisa.

Even a rambler like I can be reined in by words

Funny/clever. Nice! You should keep it up as a running thread/poem

Thank you, V

I write prose, but do love poetry enough not to quite make it away.

Enjoyed it as well. Nice and short abstractions, easy to relate to...

I agree

How true. I just talked to my daughter for about an hour on the phone about that very subject. Nice work, Sync

Thank you for the nice thoughts, everyone.

I like haiku's and such, so tend to write short pieces in poetry. I do admire those who can place multiple stanzas together with ease. It's probably why I stick mostly to writing prose.

Appreciate your time spent

Sync

I can only echo the others sync, very nice!

Packed a lot of punch in a short place, Sync. Great stuff.

-cae

Thank you both for you kind words

Appreciate the time spent.

Sync

I like this, you've done so much with so little here. It made me sit back & consider it. Good job!

*waves to fellowette newbie*

Thanks for the read, Jane

Appreciated your thoughts.

Sync

This is a nice little thing. Good work!