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  1. #1
    Ink Blot
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    Father Hood

    I though that you had gone
    When you had gone for good
    So I put on my coat
    Hung up the suet.

    Now my tree is complete.
    Now when I sleep I just dream.

  2. #2
    Apprentice
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    Suet is throwing me off. (Suit?)

    I like the last line a lot, but the one before it seems like an inside thought the reader is not privy to.

    I enjoyed this, if those two lines were somehow clarified I would enjoy it more.

  3. #3
    Ink Blot
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    Suet is a combination of beef lard and seeds you hang in a tree to feed the birds.

    It's one of my favorite words. Pronounced Sue-It

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