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    Untitled

    Wrote this in about six minutes, just something I thought I'd share here. It's about a specific topic that I've been thinking about, which I won't mention, but I'm sure you can understand the central idea.

    Be calm.
    Be still.
    Soon this will end.
    Camouflage yourself.
    Focus on the mighty figure,
    The one who will illuminate all of the answers that have eluded you,
    The one who will unravel all of the mysteries that have perplexed you.
    Digest.
    -
    Go now.
    Be free.
    It is all over.
    Showcase yourself.
    You are now their mighty figure,
    The one who will illuminate all of the answers that elude them,
    The one who will unravel all of the mysteries that perplex them.
    Regurgitate.

    -Thanks.

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    I like it, but I would have broken it into smaller lines, and maybe not capitalized each line. For example: "The one who will unravel/all of the mysteries that perplex them."


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