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    Sitting Atop a Giant of Hills

    Sitting Atop a Giant of Hills
    ~Isaiah Lake

    Sitting atop
    A giant of hills
    I look down below
    At a valley of mist

    Reaching far and wide
    Its plains do not hide
    Their wonderful, vast,
    And beautiful pride

    Look far below
    Where yesterday, I rode
    Along landscape of
    The most beautiful abode

    Wonderful, vast,
    And beautiful pride
    I have no words
    To aptly describe

    My journey is long
    Not much, I’ve not seen
    I live out my life
    A long, winding dream

    Today I watch plains
    Of vast majesty
    But last week I gave
    A native man beads

    We sat in his lodge
    And shared his long pipe
    I fellowshipped with
    The chief of a tribe

    Outside of his tent
    Children played games
    And women wove cloth
    On that bright, cheerful day

    Smoke in the air
    Tobacco in flare
    The peace of a village
    No foreign affairs

    If only they knew
    That men such as I
    Would reach out white hands
    To snuff out their lives

    We took their land
    For personal gain
    We don’t give a thought
    Of their suffering and pain

    Men and women
    And children alike
    We poured out their blood
    Vivid and bright

    Red Georgia clay
    Coincidence not
    The color of blood
    That spilled on that day

    I tell you again
    My life is a dream
    A long and winding nightmare
    It seems

    But sorrow I hold
    As I look down below
    Because I won’t wake
    From this nightmarish dream

    All too real
    And horrid it seems
    The story I tell
    No joke certainly

    Wonderful, vast,
    And beautiful pride
    We took it from them
    At the cost of their lives

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    Scrivener Isaiah Lake's Avatar
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    This is a Native American poem that I wrote for a contest at the Booth museum in Georgia.

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    wow, truly beautiful - yet sad and touching all at once brilliant work

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    Thanks! I recently discovered that I really like poetry, and it's encouraging to hear that it's half way descent.

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