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    Cool Gingerbread Man Revised

    Well here it is, taking into consideration of Martin's critiques i *hopefully* made it better

    Gingerbread Man -Revised-

    Run n' Flee
    No matter, I will catch thee
    I eat your gumdrops
    I tear off your legs
    You wiggle and squirm just like a worm
    Your cinnamon core is no more
    Now I drown you in milk till' you cant breath
    Rip out your eyes
    And one by one
    I eat them
    I break your arms in two
    And chomp and chew
    Its down to your candy heart
    what a bore
    How little fun I had taring it apart
    So I can drink its gore
    Happy Halloween Little Gingerbread man

    Last edited by Chiefspider; 11-25-2010 at 12:35 AM.

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