How can I improve this piece, I love your guy's suggestions-
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The Umpteenth Season
Flowers of meaning
Catch fleeting glances
Still winter is coming
So lower your branches
A minute of reason
The season of chances
The glory is here
The supple lamb prances
You're rooted in love
Your shade is enchanting
The holiest fruit
To everyone granted
The young meadowlark
To rest in your bark
To bask in your bask breath
To seek for your heart
You're founded forever
The truth so astounding
In the umpteenth season
Your grace is abounding
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What do you think?



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