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    On Desolation Row

    On Desolation Row

    Fortitude had it's gouges;
    Orifices, nicks, nook & cranny-cranberries
    Charred nickel black from
    The iron foundry
    Where Dubai was laid to waste

    The air of an abandoned fort
    Ran through these nostrils
    Like two vaulting typhoons
    Of moondirt

    My retreat in the ruptured sun
    Infested with the claws
    Of shadowthorne
    Burnt rubber underboots sloshing
    In the muck of the recessive dark moment

    I crawl through the corpse
    Of Ellis Island
    -That assembly of tasmanian savants
    And Alkatraz, where daunting features
    Still haunt those mausoleum walls

    I wonder.
    If before writing
    "The Count of Monte Cristo"
    Alexandre Dumas
    was a former prisoner
    himself.

    -The Second Wind-

    Vagabonds and hybrids thrive in the nooks,
    Transvestite boogie clubs all around.
    The place of vampiric dreams and lost blood.
    Where drops of melon and eggnog liqueur
    cause girls to gather up, offering their services
    In exchange for a smear of sustenance.

    Why do they choose the life of the chemical wasteland?
    Attempting to peer into the souls of teens and
    unborn mothers may cause delirium.
    And a visit from the soul eater.
    Sanity extraction almost complete.
    Monsters lead such interesting lives.

    A third attempt at introspection leaves unsanitary results.
    The smell of ammonia and bleach:
    Ah, heavenly!
    Masochistic determination; bleeding agent orange.
    Windswept spores sprinting uphill; the verdict:
    Mopped up bones and blood for the trash disposal.
    Don't tell nobody, spread the word.

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    Fortitude had it's gouges...
    Should be "its gouges".
    Will you ever write a story for which no character will have cause to reproach you? (Stephen R. Donaldson: "The Creator" to Thomas Covenant)

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    I thank thee for the short yet succinct reply. It shall be fixed.

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