Thread: The Walls Are Closing Inn

I never thought the world could make one feel this way
Sitting in this room, thinking about you everyday
I already lost you once and now im losing you again
And it feels like the walls around me are closing inn

Just because i left once and i left a little too much
Makes me want to hear your voice again and feel your touch
The only one that ever makes me feel this way
Is you, which makes these walls close in everyday

Living my life, seems like wasting time
the thought of losing you is still on my mind
Your hair and your eyes just torched my heart
And these walls closing in are just keeping us apart

But i know your in a better place smiling down
God it hurts so much not to have you around
With the angels up above i will see you again
Where there is no pain and no walls closing inn

The whole time I was reading this, I kept thinking that this sounds like it would be a song. Do you ever write songs?

I agree...I loved it! But did you mean inn or in? Never know with you poets?

it was meant to be in* , and i have been told that i should look into song writing by family and friends . Thank you for the compliments

Well, here I was thinking that it was a clever way of saying it. Like heartbreak hotel, only the walls are closing inn,